okay, i just read this again, and remembered the lousy comment i left some time back. so here i am to change that, because this fic deserves so much better!
first things first, i really like how even the side-characters, like heechul, are well-developed! like real effort was made to make him relevant, rather than, yknow, just putting him into the equation simply for the sake of it. the interactions between heechul and sungmin are so presh; it really shows the kind of brotherly love (for the lack of a better word) they share, and min really knows he can count on heechul when he needs to. and the fact that heechul so readily offers his support, especially towards the end when sungmin needs the assurance so much. :')
then there's rockstar kyuhyun with the smokey eyes and the heart of a...idk, ballad singer? ahahaha. so ready to take the leap for sungmin, even though he's still kinda like a kid who's afraid to get hurt, and so fragile when he thinks sungmin's left the morning after...
and sungmin. pretty face that gets all the boys (and girls), but so insecure inside... then he meets kyuhyun who changes him. maybe it's not really a change, but more of unleashing who he really is, who he's capable of being. haha i think i sound like a sap, but really, sometimes love can bring out the best in a person. and the way you write the process of sungmin coming to terms with his feelings for kyuhyun is just so beautiful :) how he fights his own demons and just keeps trying to be brave for kyu, just ♥.
really amazing how you managed to develop the plot and the characters so well in a one-shot story! ♥♥♥
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first things first, i really like how even the side-characters, like heechul, are well-developed! like real effort was made to make him relevant, rather than, yknow, just putting him into the equation simply for the sake of it. the interactions between heechul and sungmin are so presh; it really shows the kind of brotherly love (for the lack of a better word) they share, and min really knows he can count on heechul when he needs to. and the fact that heechul so readily offers his support, especially towards the end when sungmin needs the assurance so much. :')
then there's rockstar kyuhyun with the smokey eyes and the heart of a...idk, ballad singer? ahahaha. so ready to take the leap for sungmin, even though he's still kinda like a kid who's afraid to get hurt, and so fragile when he thinks sungmin's left the morning after...
and sungmin. pretty face that gets all the boys (and girls), but so insecure inside... then he meets kyuhyun who changes him. maybe it's not really a change, but more of unleashing who he really is, who he's capable of being. haha i think i sound like a sap, but really, sometimes love can bring out the best in a person. and the way you write the process of sungmin coming to terms with his feelings for kyuhyun is just so beautiful :) how he fights his own demons and just keeps trying to be brave for kyu, just ♥.
really amazing how you managed to develop the plot and the characters so well in a one-shot story! ♥♥♥