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sophie ([personal profile] butler) wrote in [personal profile] nacseo 2012-08-13 05:21 am (UTC)

you make me cry in the best/worst possible way, let me just try to explain all of my pain because road trip fic height difference my worst kink ever PINING ruining my life

Baekhyun is reading upside-down from the romance quiz section of a teen magazine HE WOULD omg dis bitch

watching Baekhyun’s profile lit by summer sun out of the corner of his eye, and wishes that he had the guts to say no the hard life of park chanyeol i'm sorry PINE HARDER

"I’m really glad I have a best friend who makes me take road trips around the entire perimeter of Korea with him on a whim in the middle of the hottest summer in the history of the world" literally the cutest line in the world i'm so mad SO MAD like idk chanyeol just drop everything to hang out with your best friend who is not really your best friend what am i even typing it's 1AM

the laugh is almost soundless, punctuated by wheezes this is a scarily accurate depiction of my laugh am i baekhyun????? my wildest dreams are coming true where can i find a chanyeol of my own how come real life is so much more harder than what i perceive myself to be i didn't sign up for this

So he does what any sane person would do: "Last one to the beach buys dinner," he says, and throws Baekhyun bodily back into the sea (cute but) NO

like the way Baekhyun's knee fits between Chanyeol's like it was made to be there, like the way he's completely in love no NO N O

prepare yourself for late night/early morning rambling but i love the way you had little interludes that give us clues to what their friendship has been like and chanyeol's deeply-set pining since the beginning DUMB BOY dis loser... but it is so hard to say no to someone who could like you back and i love how you build the tension of liking someone and being so insecure and unsure about it -- beautifully done. but maybe my favorite parts were how you balanced the silly best friends bit with the quiet parts where it's just chanyeol looking at baekhyun in certain lights, different angles that make him realize just how beautiful baekhyun actually is, even throughout all the chaos of baekhyun's dumb laughter and the road trip and just how messy things could potentially be. and i just adored how subdued the way you tied the end and beginning together, just spontaneous declarations of love in the midst of baekhyUN ASKING CHANYEOL IF HE NEEDED A POTTY BREAK

i just cry

(also this will be like the creepiest comment of your life but i had just been stalking you earlier because your twitter was on my who to follow list so what a coincidence that you posted fic! :o)

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